Here is a checklist that will maximize your
chances of getting heard and respect the listener's time.
1. Never send more than three songs unless specifically
Demo listeners like watching the "in" pile diminish
and the "out" pile grow as quickly as possible.
If the listener has a limited time to listen, which is usually
the case, the tendency is to listen to a tape/CD they know
they can complete. So if you send a demo with ten songs on
it and someone else's demo has one song, you can bet that
the "out" pile will grow quickly with one-song demos.
There's also the psychology that implies, "I've sent
you the song you need!" This is particularly true in
pitching songs to producers for a specific artist. Along those
same lines, most people resent getting tapes/CDs with 20 songs
and a letter that says, "I know you'll like at least
one of these, so just pick out what you want." They want
you to do that and send them three songs or less. songs you
totally believe in. If you're not far enough along to be able
to decide, you're not ready. When sending CDs with more than
three songs, highlight three you want the listener to focus
on first, and include the numbers of the cuts in your cover
letter and lyric sheets (so they have a reference while the
CD is on their player and they can't see the label). If they
like those, they'll listen to the others. And please, remove
2. Place your best and most commercial song first.
If you have a strong up-tempo song it's a good bet to start
with that. If they don't like the first one, it may be the
only shot you get. If you're sending a cassette, put all the
songs on the same side and put the label only on the "play"
3. Never send your original master tape or CD.
You may never see it again and it's not fair to saddle its
recipient with its responsibility.
4. Always cue your tape to the beginning of the first
You don't want the person to start listening in a bad mood
because you just wasted his time making him rewind your tape.
When you make your copies, leave four seconds between songs.
Most cassette decks have an automatic search feature, which
finds the silence between songs, stops the fast-forward and
automatically starts playing the next song. Obviously, this
isn't a problem with CDs. If your CD contains more than the
first four you want heard, clearly mark on the on the CD and
printed insert, which ones you want them to hear.
5. Send a lyric sheet, neatly typed or printed. Letterhead
It says "This is my business and I take it seriously."
Some don't like to look at lyrics while they listen, but most
do. It's a time saver to be able to see it all at once and
to see the structure of the song graphically laid out on the
page. Lead sheets (with melody and lyric together) are not
sent out with demos. They're good to have at the point where
a producer wants to record your song and you want to be sure
he/she has the correct melody, but since the current copyright
law permits tapes/CDs to be sent for copyright registration,
their importance has diminished. Lead sheets are bulky to
mail, it's too difficult to follow the lyric and visualize
the song's form, and many industry pros don't read music anyway.
It also pegs you as a songwriter over 50 who has no experience
in submitting demos since this practice went out of style
about 25 years ago.
When you type out your lyric sheet, separate the sections
of the songs with a space and label each one (verse, chorus,
bridge etc.) at the upper left side of the section. Do not
type your lyrics in prose fashion. Lay them out with the rhymes
at the ends of the lines so the structure and rhyme schemes
of the song can be seen immediately.
6. Make sure there's a copyright notice
(© 2003 I.B. Cool, All Rights Reserved) on the bottom
of the lyric sheet and on the tape or CD label. Technically,
this isn't necessary but it alerts everyone that your song
is protected, whether it's registered or not.
7. Cover letters should be short and to the point.
Let the music speak for itself and avoid hype. A professional
presentation will do more to impress someone than "I
know these are hit songs because they're better than anything
I've ever heard on the radio," or "I just know that
we can both make a lot of money if you'll publish these songs."
Avoid the temptation to tell your life story, and don't explain
how you have a terminal disease, you're the sole support of
your 10 children and if these songs don't get recorded they'll
all be homeless or worse. In fact, don't plead, apologize
or show any hint of desperation. It only gives the message
that you have no confidence in the ability of the songs to
stand on their own.
Here's what should be in your cover letter:
a. It should be addressed to a specific person
in the company.
b. It should state your purpose in sending
the demo. Are you looking for a publisher, a producer, a record
deal for you as an artist? Do you want the listener to pay
special attention to your production, your singing, your band,
or just the song? Is it targeted for a specific artist?
c. List any significant professional credits
that apply to the purpose of your submission. If you want
your song published, list other published or recorded songs,
contests won, etc. If you're a performer submitting an artist
demo, resist the temptation to grab at weak credits: "I
played at the same club that (famous star) played." Tell
them what drives you, what inspires you. Keep it short. List
real sales figures. Don't lie.
d. Include any casting ideas you might have
if you're pitching to other artists.
e. Ask for feedback if you want it. Odds
are you won't get it but give it a shot.
f. List the songs enclosed and writers'
names in the order they appear on the tape/CD. (Lyric sheets
should also be enclosed in the same order the songs appear
on the demo.)
g. Thank them for their time and attention.
h. Include your address, phone number, Web site URL and e-mail
address (if you have one).
8. Send a self-addressed stamped envelope (SASE)
if you want your tape or CD back.
There are two schools of thought about this. On the
pro SASE side, if you don't want to lose all those tapes/CDs,
you can't expect to get them back without it. There's another
school of thought, though, that if you say you want it back,
you're assuming they won't like it. There's no guarantee that
you'll get them back even if you do send a SASE, in which
case you're gambling even more money, and worse could happen
than your tape or CD sitting around a producer's office.
9. Your name, address and phone number should be
on the tape or CD, box, and on every lyric sheet.
It seems like such a common sense request. In fact
it would be embarrassing to even suggest that you might forget
to do it if I didn't see it happen constantly. The problem
on this end is that, between listening sessions at the office,
the car, and home, it's so easy to separate the tape from
the box or lyric sheet. Once they've gone to the trouble to
find your hit song, not finding you is a fate they don't deserve.
10. Be sure you have adequate postage. Also,
don't send your tape in an ordinary stationery envelope. It's
risky because rough postal handling could force the edge of
the tape box through the envelope. Use a special envelope
with an insulated lining. Some people also prefer the soft
"bubble" tape box because it doesn't have sharp
edges and it's lighter to mail. CDs have an obvious advantage
in this respect as there are very lightweight sleeves available
for them. Having said that, jewel boxes are preferred because
, hopefully, they can stack it on a shelf and read the label
on the edge if they decide to keep it.
The main thing to remember is to make your demo submission
as easy as possible to deal with.
Using the Internet: Your Demo as Audio File
An increasingly popular strategy is sending your demo as an
audio file. It's rare these days that a record company, producer
or manager doesn't have a high-speed Internet access line.
Obviously, many of the above suggestions don't apply to sound
Giant Records A&R Executive, Craig Coburn says (footnote:
Music Connection Magazine Vol. XXV #1 01/01/01): "In
the future, I would love to see people soliciting the record
labels — whether it's artists, managers or lawyers -
using the Internet. I'd like them to send me a letter asking
me to check out their web site rather than sending me the
We're not getting that many electronic submissions yet and
I'd like to. When I'm talking to people, I encourage them
to send MP3's The Quality of MP3 is not exactly up to the
quality of a CD, but it's absolutely close enough for an A&R
person to hear the music and to know if it's something that
excites us or not."
The most popular formats are MP3 and RealAudio. The fidelity
is not quite CD quality but still adequate to show them what
you do. There are a couple different procedures for this:
Send an E-mail with the audio file attached. Follow the suggestions
listed above for cover letter. Include phone number(s). Also
include your Web site address so they can click it and go
directly to it. When they get to your site, they'll hopefully
find additional bio material, photos and lyrics. Just send
them an e-mail intriguing enough to get them to go to your
site and hear your music there.
Indie marketing guru Tim Sweeney suggests that because of
the limited amount of time someone may want to spend at any
site and the degree of difficulty their online access speeds
may present, it's important to help them decide quickly which
of your songs may be of most interest to them. You can help
by providing a short description like this one provided on
the site of Franklin Spicer and Valerie Ford's Pegasus Project,
a soft jazz, world music group.
"The first song Franklin ever heard from Val was a reggae
tune she had recorded called One People. He really liked the
positive message and the infectious chorus. Franklin talked
her into doing a rewrite and making it a Pegasus Project tune.
They wanted to share a positive message of how we all are
part of one global family. This song was shaped from a number
of African musical influences, including the Tuku style. The
huge chorus backup vocals were done in two days of recording
using seven different singers."
Note that the description includes information on the style,
what it's about, why it was written and how it was recorded.
Their site also includes lyrics to all the songs.
Your demo will introduce you to the eyes and ears of many
music industry professionals. Take this introduction very
seriously. It's your job interview. It should look good, have
something important to say, and say it well, There are a lot
of other applicants for the job. The pros are looking for
the best. Be it!
© (Writer's Digest Books)
Reprinted with permission from John Braheny's new revised
edition of The Craft and Business of Songwriting